Lit. Review --- First Draft

When reviewing my first draft for my lit review, I learned that some aspects are good and some need work. The things that are good about my part are the introductions into the quotations. Something that needs work is the discussion part in the essay.The reason my topic needs a literature review is because obesity is something that needs to be brought up to people. It is getting out of hand not many people are doing anything about it. The research that I have gathered came alot from prior knowledge. Much of it is basically talking about how fast food restaurants are around every corner and offer fat foods for cheap prices. Most people know this about fast food, so I need to include more research into it, too. Something that I would hope to include in the article would be aspects of restaurant owners and what they thing about people eating their food. It would be a good way to get both sides of the story.